• Lew
    • Joined in July 2017
  • Lew commented on Chapter 1 :
    7/11/2017 10:58:46 PM
    I enjoy your pacing and natural writing style that set you apart from many of the writers on JukePop. Your introduction of Amber is well done. Thank you for posting this ... Show More
    9 +Votes
    The sole beneficiary of her aunt's estate, Amber decides to move into the large house in the village she's never heard ... More Info
    • Charlotte Donnelly Aw, thank you so much! I hope you keep enjoying it! :D
      7/12/2017 1:08:25 PM
  • Lew commented on Chapter 0 :
    7/4/2017 12:56:52 AM
    A gripping start!
    9 +Votes
    The sole beneficiary of her aunt's estate, Amber decides to move into the large house in the village she's never heard ... More Info
  • Lew wants more of Tacenda
    7/4/2017 12:52:57 AM
    9 +Votes
    The sole beneficiary of her aunt's estate, Amber decides to move into the large house in the village she's never heard ... More Info
  • Lew commented on Chapter 2 :
    7/3/2017 4:43:02 PM
    I’ve just started your second chapter and already I’m struggling. The example of a “Times” news article doesn’t follow any of the basic guidelines of how a newspaper ... Show More
    127 +Votes
    Ray Cochrane is a professional thug. He works in secret, paid off by clients to intimidate and punish people. Ray says ... More Info
    Genres:
    Crime, Mystery, Thriller
    • Asher Wismer Thank you for your feedback, Lew! I'll definitely work on those issues as I write more.
      7/3/2017 9:24:27 PM
  • Lew commented on Chapter 2 :
    7/3/2017 4:18:54 PM
    Enticing first chapter! And on I read…
    127 +Votes
    Ray Cochrane is a professional thug. He works in secret, paid off by clients to intimidate and punish people. Ray says ... More Info
    Genres:
    Crime, Mystery, Thriller
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