• Erik McKinnon
    • BC, CA
    • Joined in December 2016
  • I like writing.
  • 3/21/2017 6:56:46 PM
    20 +Votes
    In the modern world, a wizard can use a smart phone. He can also play video games, or eat sandwiches, just like anybody ... More Info
  • 3/14/2017 5:30:37 PM
    20 +Votes
    In the modern world, a wizard can use a smart phone. He can also play video games, or eat sandwiches, just like anybody ... More Info
  • 3/7/2017 6:32:02 AM
    20 +Votes
    In the modern world, a wizard can use a smart phone. He can also play video games, or eat sandwiches, just like anybody ... More Info
  • 3/2/2017 12:42:44 AM
    Besides a few grammatical errors (ex. punctuation, spaces, etc), this is a fun tale so far. It made me giggle multiple times. Keep up the good work!
    (1 chapter reviews) | 1 +Votes
    When finding himself in a different world, dimitri solari is left understandably confused in his situation. To make ... More Info
    • Jonathan Solis Many thanks, its always a pleasure to see readers enjoying the story ^.^ Look out for the new installment to the series :)
      3/2/2017 3:30:53 PM
  • Erik McKinnon commented on Chapter 1 :
    3/2/2017 12:49:45 AM
    Ooh. I like the idea. Keep up the good work!
    21 +Votes
    Alba MacVicar is about 5'5", scrawny with shaggy self-inflicted shortish brown hair, and has a day job. It isn't much, ... More Info
    • Oru Thank you very much! Always nice to see a new face reading my things! I appreciate you taking the time!
      3/2/2017 11:41:17 AM
  • 3/2/2017 12:39:55 AM
    I'm aboard so far, but there's a few issues I'd like to point out. Not anything terrible, mind you, but you might want to work on formatting in the future. I know that ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 3 +Votes
    The young girl, Ariane, and the noble heir of the Kingdom, Bruce, discover the tight bond that links them: they're ... More Info
    • Betelgeuse Watson Thank you, I appreciate feedback. This has been one of the first series I wrote and I know it's not perfect, even in a logical meaning. Every time I read it I find some more grammatical errors, I can't get rid of them completely! But I'm not English, I'm Italian and some mistakes appear at times. And yes, JukePop has a strange way of formatting text. Thank you, Betelgeuse
      3/2/2017 8:31:42 AM
  • 3/2/2017 12:34:09 AM
    I apologize for posting doubles. My comment was meant to be here, so my bad! I love magic! How's that for a review? Seriously though, it isn't easy writing a fantasy ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 25 +Votes
    Aleynonlia's Spellblade Academy is the first of its kind, teaching young magic users to control, refine, and responsibly ... More Info
    • Aden Ng Thanks for the review, Erik. And welcome aboard!
      3/2/2017 5:47:47 AM
  • Erik McKinnon commented on Chapter 1 :
    3/2/2017 12:51:04 AM
    This is a fun tale so far. I recommend spacing paragraphs apart in the future so it's easier to read, though, but I'm still interested!
    1 +Votes
    A traditional tale about a boy going out into the fantastical world on a pilgrimage. He will experience life, love, ... More Info
  • Ryan Watt commented on Chapter 0 :
    10/24/2016 5:35:18 PM
    Finally have a chance today to start reading, Sorry for taking a month to do it! - I like that you do a great job of referencing the last TearHa story, but also give ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 25 +Votes
    Aleynonlia's Spellblade Academy is the first of its kind, teaching young magic users to control, refine, and responsibly ... More Info
    • Aden Ng No worries! I struggle to keep up with all my readings as well. I'm hoping to get through some Flocked this week though. Glad the restart worked for you. It's always a challenge to balance between new readers and existing readers. Hope you'll enjoy this new tale.
      10/25/2016 5:59:35 AM
    • Erik McKinnon I love magic! How's that for a review? Seriously though, it isn't easy writing a fantasy story based around magic and spells and it still being a fun read. This so far has been fun! I like what you have going, and I'll be following to read more.
      3/2/2017 12:31:56 AM
  • 2/28/2017 7:53:37 PM
    20 +Votes
    In the modern world, a wizard can use a smart phone. He can also play video games, or eat sandwiches, just like anybody ... More Info
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