• Becky M
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    • Joined in April 2016
  • Becky is a poet, blogger, and fiction writer gaining inspiration from the beautiful Rocky Mountains. Her fiction ranges from young adult to adult, many sub-genres of ... Show More
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 1 :
    2/6/2017 4:40:42 AM
    I loved your description of the zombie women. Since his name is in the title, I'm pretty sure Matt is not going to get his face eaten off, but I just want to say that if ... Show More
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    What starts out as normal night of cheesy flirtation and amateur magic shows quickly breaks out in to an full blown ... More Info
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      5/27/2017 10:00:03 PM
  • 4/28/2017 12:40:42 PM
    Hey Becky. Just as a thanks for your feedback on part one of Banter, I'd like to send you the PDF of the whole three part novel. My email is melmo672@gmail.com. Shoot me ... Show More
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 26 :
    2/14/2017 12:33:37 AM
    This is really starting to get creepy. Creepier. Unreliable narrators are so much fun. I feel like "out with it" is kind of an greasiness phrase for a therapist to use. I ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 630 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt I love reading and writing unreliable narrators and Sean is ... umm, extra unreliable? Thanks a lot for reading!
      4/5/2017 7:56:04 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 11 :
    3/4/2017 1:29:19 AM
    I don't really understand his thought process in the 1st paragraph, but maybe it's just because he's a bit delirious.
    24 +Votes
    He's witty, he's handsome, and he's everything they've always wanted; that is all his women know when they take him ... More Info
    • Melissa Moore Delirium is part of it, but it's also about ego.
      3/4/2017 1:51:11 AM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 25 :
    1/28/2017 7:08:28 AM
    I love how he slams the door in Ali's face. Sean's behavior around Ali is always entertaining. I'm glad the cat still exists.
    (1 chapter reviews) | 630 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt I always have a great time writing those two together. Thank you! And yes, the cat exists. :D
      3/1/2017 9:23:03 AM
  • 2/28/2017 11:25:36 PM
    Hey Becky. Just letting you know that I've posted a few more chapters of Banter.
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 8 :
    11/18/2016 5:27:16 AM
    Ahh yes, more of Willem's positive, upbeat attitude. At least he's consistent. :) I find it amusing that this religious group is protesting the band and the punk scene, ... Show More
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    (EARLY DRAFT) Vampires stand on the brink of extinction when a talented and troubled punk staggers into their world. ... More Info
    • Angi Shearstone He's a fun character to write, that's for sure. And yeah, most of the world is oblivious to vampires in general, here.
      2/28/2017 9:39:29 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 1 :
    2/15/2017 6:10:52 AM
    I love his rant about the psychiatrist at the beginning. It's definitely a good opener. I have a psych degree and work in the field, (which means I'm a psych nerd) so I'm ... Show More
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    Am I mad? Well I'll leave that for you to decide. Upon having my Psyche brutally diagnosed with an array of mental ... More Info
    • Zayd Aslam Thanks for the feedback, Becky. I definitely need to do a bit more research on the psych front, but I am glad you enjoyed the story so far. The whole Jimmy, Timmy, and Tommy thing was meant to show the mc's disinterest but I guess its not too clear so might change it. Anyway thanks for reading, and for my first comment!
      2/28/2017 9:11:38 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 9 :
    1/22/2017 5:15:53 AM
    Wow. We're going deeper here. I can really feel Aiden's frustration, because nothing he does is right. I'm really enjoying your story so far. The characters are all ... Show More
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    Aiden, Lydia, Caleb, and Sunshine are four vastly different teenagers that are forced to work as a group in their high ... More Info
    • Katrina Thornley I read to escape and I write to try and provide the same opportunity for others. Thank you so much for your feedback!
      2/27/2017 5:50:09 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 10 :
    2/27/2017 6:17:03 AM
    He keeps saying that he's ambivalent about sex, but there were moments when this didn't seem completely true. He seemed kind of into it, with this woman, and the old ... Show More
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    He's witty, he's handsome, and he's everything they've always wanted; that is all his women know when they take him ... More Info
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