• TP Keating
    • Joined in July 2015
  • TP Keating is a regular contributor to NewLondonWriters.com
  • Clark Farley commented on Chapter 1 :
    3/25/2017 2:00:54 AM
    OK, I'm on board... hey! Andre! (your 'Neither Legal Nor Tender' was one of the first I started when I first arrived in this place) Looking forward to the story...
    51 +Votes
    Beth Hargreaves had sprung into action, to save London from an outbreak of potentially lethal (and unseasonal) fog. But ... More Info
    • TP Keating ...and I'm looking forward to your further comments and feedback. Thank you :-)
      3/25/2017 11:15:43 AM
  • Robert Tucker commented on Chapter 17 :
    3/24/2017 12:23:06 AM
    Some new interesting creative absurdist comedy developments in this chapter: a rock-bear drumming troupe, Bandido and pony safety awareness, and what must be a satirical ... Show More
    51 +Votes
    Beth Hargreaves had sprung into action, to save London from an outbreak of potentially lethal (and unseasonal) fog. But ... More Info
    • TP Keating Bandido is learning to drum at the moment...
      3/25/2017 11:14:32 AM
  • TP Keating commented on Chapter 11 :
    3/23/2017 7:13:24 PM
    Introducing a trope and at the same time cheerfully subverting it, your approach is one I fully appreciate. No wonder I'm enjoying this tale so much.
    319 +Votes
    A tale of love and laughs, fights and flights, heart and hate, and mostly ESCAPE. The Morning Star is a high-profile ... More Info
  • TP Keating commented on Chapter 10 :
    3/23/2017 7:08:33 PM
    Poor Caleb! I mean, it makes for a gripping read, but poor Caleb!
    319 +Votes
    A tale of love and laughs, fights and flights, heart and hate, and mostly ESCAPE. The Morning Star is a high-profile ... More Info
  • TP Keating commented on Chapter 44 :
    3/18/2017 11:26:05 AM
    The chapter is a splendid conclusion to a wholly entertaining, compelling and thoroughly well-realized tale. Right up to the optimistic last words, "We’ve got a way ... Show More
    393 +Votes
    Updates Wednesday-ish. Galania. A kingdom that stretches from oceans in the west to seas in the east. Its people hum ... More Info
    • Eduardo Perini Muniz Hey, I want to know if Nuete will surive and eventually save her parents. Hope you continue her tale someday. Anyway, nice book, it was an enjoyable trip and I hope to learn more about this fantasy world of yours in your other works.
      3/20/2017 12:28:39 AM
    • J.A. Waters Thank you so much! So very much to the both of you! I'm always astonished and honored to know that someone has read the things that I've written. It's quite an experience for me to think through and act out the lives of these characters and I'm always excited to share the results with readers. There will certainly be additional installments on Nalan, and Nuette's next story is already outlined and awaiting some additional development prior to her first step forward. Thank you again. Your thoughts and comments have been instrumental and helping me nudge the story to a stronger production.
      3/23/2017 6:50:12 PM
  • Robert Tucker commented on Chapter 16 :
    3/16/2017 5:22:16 PM
    It's nice to see Coralie reenter the story. She is a fun engaging character personality. The Sugar-)-Rama website demonstrating uses of fog is clever.
    51 +Votes
    Beth Hargreaves had sprung into action, to save London from an outbreak of potentially lethal (and unseasonal) fog. But ... More Info
    • TP Keating I think that Coralie is an incredibly good egg, for putting up with all of these shenanigans. As for the fog sweets, who knows, they could yet catch on (it's not as if fog is in short supply in London!).
      3/18/2017 10:54:11 AM
  • TP Keating commented on Chapter 41 :
    3/15/2017 6:33:53 PM
    "His words were the rough glottal cracks of Galorian tongue, but they carried a tune." I like the way the story is always packed full of detail, big and small, which ... Show More
    393 +Votes
    Updates Wednesday-ish. Galania. A kingdom that stretches from oceans in the west to seas in the east. Its people hum ... More Info
    • J.A. Waters I try not to get too carried away with the adjectives, but sometimes its nice to let myself dip deeper into the imagery / figurative imagery side of things. Or just description in general. I hope it does come off as an enhancement rather than a pace-killer, but I also want the pace to slow dramatically at this point too. Glad you enjoyed this installment! Your comments are always appreciated.
      3/16/2017 4:43:34 PM
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